Thursday, June 23, 2016

Which Fork in the Road to Take?(A tongue in cheek view of the mass flooding of eBooks)

     So I've ran into a slight dilemma as I'm transcribing my second novel from spiral notebook to computer. I've already stated that I won't publish my novel at the new novel mark of 50,000 words, but am I cheating myself if I stick to that promise?

     With e-publishing becoming so easy to do, many writers are taking this new  route of publishing a multitude of 50,000 word novels instead of the more  traditional 80,000 plus length. I'm curious why this is happening because as a reader of fantasy I love the depth and narrative that can be obtained in the more lengthy novels. As a writer and reader I just don't feel that 50,000 is enough to give me the emotional high and lows I get from reading something of that length. I'm not saying that there aren't books that length capable of doing such a thing, but I feel that they are far and between. I do think they can tell a small story from a greater world or story arc exceptional well, but then I guess that's more of a novella in my opinion.

     Maybe it's the hope that a bunch of shorter novels versus one or two larger books can help get their name out there, possibly making it easier for readers to find them. In that aspect I can definitely see the merits of following such a path. In all reality this is probably why most do it, and would be the biggest persuader for me to do so also. After all, as authors all we really want is for people to read our work.(I've been known to hand out more then a few free copies to people who I think are really interested in my novel but might be on the fence about buying, or maybe a little short on funds-never know who they might know)

     Cold hard cash-might be the biggest culprit. As writers we all aspire to leave our daily grind and buy that cottage in the woods, next to a quiet secluded lake where we watch our wife (replace wife with your own significant other whether it be another person, cat, dog, or over-sized pillow)  chase her chickens around with her wine glass tilting crazily, or coffee mug if it's the morning. Then lock her out so I can actually get some writing done. That would be the life <sigh's wistfully>.

     Truthfully either way is correct. Each writer has to do what feels right for them. For me it's the more traditional length and my next manuscript is shaping up to be longer than my first which was around 84,000 words, We follow our muses, wherever those crazy bastards take us and hopefully at the end we have a tale that others will enjoy reading it as much as we did writing it.

Happy Reading
-EW-

Sunday, June 12, 2016

A Gift for My Readers!!

     Since time is working against me and progress has been hellishly slow I'm giving another free chapter from my second book. So without further adieu here is Chapter 2 from Hand of the Black Blade, Book 2 of the Blades of Allura series. Enjoy.

Chapter Two
Nineteen years prior to Galen’s defeat of Blackfur
            “Aaeeeii!” the banshee wail echoed mercilessly through the stone corridors of The Mountain, ancient stronghold of the dwarven people. Outside of a thick set of ironwood doors that failed to mute the horrifying scream, stomped a thick-set dwarf wringing his heavily calloused hands and often staring with worry tinged gray eyes at the closed portal.
            Toebal Deepbellow, newly appointed First Smith of the Gold District, had been taken completely by surprise when the runner had showed up at his smithy with word that his wife had gone into labor, but not nearly as surprised as when he had found out that Solira was with child nine months ago after he had agreed to wed her. The flame haired dwarf still harbored doubts about the father of the child growing in his wife’s belly, especially as Solira had become more and more withdrawn as the pregnancy progressed.
            Being from a minor trade family, Toebul couldn’t believe his luck when King Bluntpick asked him to take High Merchant Solira’s hand in marriage. The offer of promotion combined with Solira’s large dowry had allowed the young dwarf to look past the rumors of the High Merchant’s haunted past. Now, Toebul was second guessing the greed and ambition that had led him down this path.
            A second pain-laced scream snapped Toebul from his dark reverie and by the third scream, he was slamming a heavy shoulder against the unyielding door. Despite the hearsay, Toebul had found his feeling’s for his wife growing as they had spent time together and the screams ripped at his heart and buried the doubts forming in his head.
            “Let me in you pebble-licking bastards!” he cursed at the impassable doors. “Let me see my wife!”
            Again and again the heavily muscle smith threw himself against the steadily weakening barrier until the stout timber frame buckled and then cracked. With a roar of triumph, Toebul bowled through the broken doorway and charged into the birthing chamber. Quickly scanning the room with grey eyes framed in worry, Toebul took two quick strides towards Solira and her bloody bed. The sight of the child laying in the High Merchant’s limp arms caused the smith to stumble and fall to his knees.
            “By the Scales, no,” he said in weak denial.
            The babe lay there squalling his unhappiness at being taken from his warm and secure haven, tiny fists balled and shaking in protest towards the chambers low ceiling. But instead of the healthy pink of a newborn child, the babe’s skin was the color of fresh smoke, and the soft down of his crown was replaced by coarse black hair that bristled in all directions.
            “I’m sorry, Toebul. I’m so so sorry…” Solira’s trembling voice disappeared into soundless sobs.
            His wife’s tear streaked cheeks and pleading eyes and no small amount of his own shame were too much for Toebul to bear. The grief-stricken dwarf tore his wide bladed dagger from the sheath at his waist and lunged for the black eyed abomination.
            Before Toebul could reach the babe, two priests that had been attending Solira tackled the young dwarf while the remaining two moved to block his path.
            “Remember the pact, Master Smith,” pleaded one of the priests before Toebul’s elbow sent her rolling to the side while clenching her bleeding nose.
            “I don’t give a damn about some ancient treaty!” Toebul spat as he shrugged the remaining priest off in a desperate burst of strength, and bound to his feet. “I’ll send that monster back to the Abyssal Plane and his demon father!”
            Tearing the babe’s swaddling blankets aside, Toebul placed the point of his blade against the crying infant’s heart. He looked at Solira to confirm his actions and the High Merchant dropped her eyes in shame, but nodded her head in assent.
            “Hold your hand, Toebul!” a commanding voice boomed from the doorway.
            “I cannot, sire,” Toebul apologized to his king without taking his eyes from the mewling infant. “I won’t let this demon spawn stain my family’s honor.”
            “Remember the treaty, Toebul. Any demon-git must be allowed to live until it reaches adulthood or the ones responsible for its demise will cause a rift to open between our world and the Abyssal Plane.” King Buhlrok Bluntpick spoke softly as he carefully made his way to the blacksmith.
            “I don’t care about some damn rift!” Toebul snarled and made to plunge the dagger down but suddenly the strength fled from his rapidly numbing fingers and the weapon tumbled harmlessly to the ground.
            “What…what is happening?’ the bewildered smith begged his wife. Solira’s only response was a look of pure horror on her pale, moon-shaped face.
            King Bluntpick gently placed his hand on Toebul’s rounded shoulder and removed his dagger from the smith’s back with the other. “I’m sorry, Toebul, but while you have just your family to look out for; I have the welfare of an entire kingdom to consider,” the king said before dropping the blood-tainted dagger to the floor in distaste.
            Gently the old king lowered Toebul’s body to the cold stone floor, and softly slid his calloused hands over the smith’s sightless eyes, closing them for the last time. “See to it he has a proper burial, and that his family is duly compensated” Buhlrok ordered the wide-eyed priest who had taken a tentative step towards the two. “He did not deserve to die like this, but I will not risk the lives of the many for the few if they are of my blood.”
            “Yes, my King,” the elder priest bowed to Buhlrok and motioned for another to come forward and help him with the body. “We will take Toebul to the Shrine of the Scales and give him Ozra’s blessing before returning him to Allura’s earthen embrace.”
            A soft clapping issued from a shadowy corner of the room, interrupting the doleful scene unfolding in the birthing chamber.
            “How wonderful!” I get to watch the birth of my son and a show,” Zarrix slipped from the shadows, long fingers clasped in delight and a wicked smile pasted on his feline face. “It must be my birthday!”
            Seize him!” King Buhlrok roared as he moved protectively between his niece and the demon.
            The king’s two bodyguards rushed the demon, axes held high and shields held defensively before them. The lead dwarf swung his axe in an overhead chop, seeking to remove the demonic threat in one powerful move. Zarrix easily sidestepped the falling axe and responded with a vicious backhand that caved in the guard’s steel helm and knocking the bodyguard to the floor either dead or unconscious.
            Seeing his partner so easily dispatched by the demon, the remaining bodyguard was more cautious in his approach. His caution proved pointless. Zarrix continued his mocking smile while his forked tongue flicked out tauntingly, with the speed of a striking snake the demon lord’s barbed tail lashed and removed the dwarf’s windpipe. With eyes wide in surprise the bodyguard dropped his weapons and futilely tried to hold together his torn throat, in seconds he joined his comrade.
            “Such fuss over a farther wanting to see his new born son,” Zarrix quipped, while he wiped his tail on the fallen bodyguard’s tunic.
            “I may not be able to kill the babe, demon, but there’s no pact against separating your black soul from its twisted body,” Buhlrok threatened as he placed himself between Zarrix and his niece. In the dwarven king’s hands rested the shaft of his trademark two-handed hammer, his grim visage reflected in the polished adamantium head of the fabled weapon as he took a menacing step towards Zarrix.
            The demon lord eyed the shining weapon with unease. All the denizens of the Infernal Realms feared Justice, a legendary weapon gifted to the dwarven people by Ozra in the early days of creation. It was said that the hammer in the hands of a trueborn king was unbeatable and Zarrix knew more than a few demons that had met their end going against the holy weapon.
            “Very well, Bluntpick,” Zarrix reluctantly surrendered. “I’ll leave your dirty little rabbit hole of a kingdom, but remember the treaty, rockborn. My son is to be cared for until his eighteenth birthday and given free passage to seek out his kin.”
            “I haven’t forgotten the bloody pact, demon, as foul as it may be, you can be assured that the dwarves of the Mountain will honor it,” Buhlrok promised though his hard grey eyes revealed how he truly felt about the squalling bundle laying in his niece’s lap.
            Zarrix began to mutter lines of spidery words while rapidly twisting his long finger in obscure positions with each clicking syllable. Finally, a circle of shadow appeared beside the demon lord. Zarrix had slipped halfway into the portal when he stopped and turned back towards the watching dwarves.
            “Oh sweetheart, make sure you take care of our little bundle of joy,” Zarrix blew Solira a kiss and gave the horrified woman a salacious wink before stepping through the shadow portal.
The inky blackness snapped out of existence like a shattered pane of glass. Infuriated by the demon lord’s callousness, Buhlrok had charged Zarrix with Judgment held high, but had to spin away at the last second to avoid the fouls shards. Behind him the remaining priests had thrown themselves over Solira and the babe, grunting in pain as the residual shadow magic pierced their unarmored backs.
Forcing her way between the two dwarves lying atop her, Solira screamed her denial at her uncle, brown eyes wide in fear and indignation at being forced to care for the child. “I will not raise this bastard, uncle!”
I’m sorry, but the choice is not yours, my poor Solira. The treaty with the demon lords is clear and unbreakable.” Buhlrok said, his words heavy with regret.
“I will not!” Solira shouted. “I’ll will end my life before I will raise a demon spawn!”
With the speed and ferocity of a cornered badger, the High Merchant’s right arm lashed out, catching the closest priest by surprise. With a savage twist she tore the dagger from the stunned dwarf’s belt and placed it against her trembling throat.
“Stay back, uncle,” she warned as Buhlrock moved towards her. “I swear by Ozra’s beard I’ll slit my throat, your precious pact be damned.”
Now, Solira, I know what I am asking of you is a tremendous burden, but think of your family, your friends, by the Scales the entire realm,” the king pleaded while he tried to decide whether or not he could reach his niece before the blade cut to deep. “I promise as soon as the child is off the teat we will find him a nanny and you can go back to living your life. Wouldn’t you like to take your place once again on the council? To get back to your family? I know they miss you back in the hall.”
Buhlrok tried to keep a stream of calming ideas flowing towards his niece as he crept slowly closer. As the king’s words entered Solira’s despair clouded mind she absorbed what he was saying, but instead of burning away the darkness, Buhlrok’s attempts only wrapped the bands of sorrow tighter around her aching heart. The former High Merchant would never again be respected by her peers, and no respectable male would want the soiled woman to be their mate. Solira knew that her future would be bleak and blanketed in loneliness which she couldn’t bear the thought of, but she also knew that her uncle would stop any attempts she made to end her life right now. Reluctantly she released the dagger into Buhlrok’s hand. Regret etched plainly on her face.
“Thank you, Solira. I know it wasn’t an easy choice, but it was the right one.” the king stated, gently taking his niece’s hands into his.
“You will stand by me, uncle?” Solira asked, and brown eyes locked with grey as the two matched wills. It was the king who looked away.
“Of course, Solira, of course,” he promised but Solira knew the words were as hollow as his promises.
Two nights later King Bluntpick burst into Solira’s chambers unannounced. His thick brow knitted together in fury while a thunderstorm gathered behind his slate-grey eyes.
            “By the Scales, what happened in here? I stated that Solira wasn’t to be left unattended,” the king roared as he stomped through the sitting chamber and into his niece’s bedroom. He glared balefully at Solira’s cooling corpse dangling from an oak rafter. “Who was on watch?”
The guardsmen looked nervously at one another and then stared blankly at the stone walls, anything to avoid the gaze of their king that they had failed. Angrily Buhlrok spun on his heels away from the hanging body of his niece and slowly marched down the line of fidgeting dwarves, staring intently at each one before moving on to the next in line. When no one took credit for the slip up, Buhlrok’s wrath faded away and his broad shoulders slumped heavily.
The old dwarf gave a loud sigh of resignation and turned back to watch his niece with sad eyes as she spun in slow circles. Time reversed itself and Buhlrok no longer saw the swollen, blackened face with bulging eyes, but the round cherub face of a ten year old Solira. The memory of when he had taught his niece the best place to find the plumpest and juiciest mushrooms, rose like a joyful bubble through the murky depths of his broken heart. Slowly at first and then more rapidly memories of Solira burst forth and slowly a small smile pulled at the corner of the king’s mouth. He had thought that Solira might be the one to replace him when the time came for him to step down, but now those hopes were gone, replaced by a selfish creature bent on its own perverse desires.
A cough brought the king from his mourning. “It’s of no matter now,” he mumbled and then once again addressed his guards as their monarch.
“Captain Mowvin, fetch all the wet nurses you can find, and let us pray the little bastard will take to a teat. If not…” King Buhlrok let the unspoken threat hang.
The dwarven king glanced at the gray skinned babe and chills danced the length of his spine. The babe had quieted and his soulless black eyes were now staring unblinking at Buhlrok.
“Lord of the Scales watch over us,” King Buhlrok Bluntpick prayed under his breath.